February 3, 2023
 LOVE AND HATE (Song Review and Critique) 
“I’m Lyrical”

Love : The artist’s voice and the potential in the lyrics.
Hate: The flow, Lack of Confidence,generic beat.  The way that nothing rhymes except the hook portion and only some of that.

I feel the artist has potential, the song comes out as a poem, there is very little effort to make it rhyme, which in turn F*CKS UP THE FLOW FOR ME..

SUGGESTIONS: The concepts are there, I feel like lyrically the artist has a spark..just needs a little more lighter fluid..work on the flow,create rhyme schemes, listen to the greats, keep creating, keep grinding.

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