“VOICE OF THE NEW BREED”
by colossal music
Beat- Beat was average
Originality- Didn’t really sound like anyone else i’ve heard before
Lyrics : Nothing really thought provoking or made me want to run it back
Melody: Melody is a victorious one, it was nice
Flow- the flow is average, not that impressive, it’s robotic except on the hook, the energy just doesn’t seem to be there.
Production/Recording quality- the vocals sound like they could be mixed better, it’s hard to hear the artist
Does the song engage the listener and/or have emotional
impact?
Not too much it’s more about the artist doesn’t really connect
Does the melody suit the song and contribute towards its
impact? it’s like a triumph melody so yes I would say so.
Is the song memorable?
Not too much got a little boring
Work on the delivery, and the flow it was almost like you were yelling on the track.
This gets a D-
Keep working on your craft, try different flows
– Phoenixstar9