Hook- I think the hook really would have done better with a singer on it
Beat- The beat was nice the strings and the drums at the intro were a nice touch.
Originality- I would say that it is pretty original, not a lot of rappers just go for the REAL life shit, they either try to be too deep or too violent, or too raunchy, this was refreshing
Lyrics : Were pretty dope,but the flow throws the focus off
Flow- Flow is off, not enough energy into it, like it’s being read
confidence- Sounds as if the artist is shaking or something in the booth. eh.
Production/Recording quality- pristine, very clean sound
Does the song engage the listener and/or have emotional
impact? It’s hard to connect because of the flow, the artist doesn’t sound focused so it throws me off.
Does the melody suit the song and contribute towards its
A little i love the melody
Is the song memorable?
I think the artist should go back and re record it with more