Beat- the beat doesn’t sound properly mixed, didn’t care for it.
Lyrics : nothing quite quotable
Melody: Melody doesn’t seem to fit the song
Production/Recording quality- This song has potential, the vocals need a little more correction, the beat makes the vocals sound like mud in some portions. That mix is what’s hurting the song.
Does the song engage the listener and/or have emotional
Not to me, the beat is a little too hard on my ears to connect
Does the melody suit the song and contribute towards its
Is the song memorable?
The first part of the hook maybe
I Think it just needs a little more work and a proper mixed CLEAN sounding version.Work on the harmonies, I think the beat hurt the song the most. Keep working Keep grinding.